I feel like being creative.

chickendude · Post by **chickendude** » Wed 26 Jul, 2006 2:25 pm

hands tied eyes locked like the abused child trying to steal back his innocence
little by little anguishly acting to reconcile a nevertobeforgotten past
there's a feverish escape
emotional appeal
in the hortatory compulsions to sin and to spread
stone roof above shields both us from world and world from us
picture stitched elegantly green
despite the lack of money and substance
with the residual fabrics of ill hearts
passage followed by a bloodyred red
nails blindly barge away through hair folicles and flesh
the texture, the impulse
that write off fustian to the superficial in favor of cultivated silence
erects a monumental compassion for sensual embrace
a life drawn in blocks of clay!
an artist molds in clay's shame!
let our senses deliquesce, let your fences deliquesce
it's the only way to make this right.

Shadow Phoenix · Post by **Shadow Phoenix** » Wed 26 Jul, 2006 5:39 pm

Post by **DarkAuron** » Wed 26 Jul, 2006 6:21 pm

So when would you like to be scheduled for therapy?

the_unknown_one · Post by **the_unknown_one** » Wed 26 Jul, 2006 6:51 pm

pooo... I'd like to be scheduled right now...

chickendude · Post by **chickendude** » Wed 26 Jul, 2006 7:15 pm

When would *I* like to be scheduled for therapy? Why, do I need it?

I wrote something else a few minutes ago while bored at work:

Constructed to assuage
the intricate delicacies that swiftly flip pages,
gelid blurs and burrs inside and out cannot combust
In gestures of warmth, fingers seek an entanglement, but
a heart frozen in disturbances cannot reconcile for its wearer the grievances thrust therein

Can a dream destroy itself? When unable to think we try hardest.

A beloved son once had his immortal body slain,
claiming love his motive, claiming forgiveness his deed
He caved in, would you not die in disbelief?

Cowering beneath covers from frigidity outside,
gripping tighter and tighter realizing the sanctity of a breath
Nibbling at the edges, pulling them in closer with seraphic touch,
so tangled and wretched but warmer than ever
...an artificial nooseÃƒÂ¢Ã¢â€šÂ¬Ã‚Â¦
Its fibers brush your neck in a salty approval,
lungs disproportionately exhausted after so many years and breaths taken

Don't claim this suicide, just ride it halfway through
Swimming the illustrative rivers of this malapportionment
paints a congenial surrounding that instigates one consideration:
a pragmatic decision will conflagrate this heat
and consecrate your message.
His grace glides icily into me.

EDIT: I don't like that one so much. It doesn't flow very well. Hah, sorry I'll stop posting my writings now.

Shadow Phoenix · Post by **Shadow Phoenix** » Thu 27 Jul, 2006 1:01 am

o_0.
Dude, when I fell in love, I didnt create That.

dysfunction · Post by **dysfunction** » Thu 27 Jul, 2006 5:00 am

On your second one- if it actually made sense to anyone but you, it would be quite good.

Arcane WIzard · Post by **Arcane WIzard** » Thu 27 Jul, 2006 10:46 am

I think I understand his second one better than his first.

Sounds to be about love, christ, and faith.

chickendude · Post by **chickendude** » Thu 27 Jul, 2006 12:24 pm

I think if I told you the topic of the first one it would make much more sense. It's about two young kids with unstable backgrounds entirely dependent on each other, not necessarily in love. They feel pressured to have sex, but still aren't sure it's the right thing.

The second one is actually about someone who's lost/is losing their faith.