[Paper like thing?] Please review and criticize :)
Posted: Fri 17 Jul, 2009 2:31 am
It's all about a paper-like thingy whatever it is that I wrote, not for any specific purpose unless it didn't fail as much as I thought it did.. (unlikely.. )
So, I know I failed epically, I bet some of the "facts" in it are not even true, that's why I would really appreciate it if some of you would read this through and comment on it, as it would give me a chance to improve it.
Now, I don't know where to upload text files, so I just put it here in the post in a code block to preserve formatting.. hope you don't mind..
(I know I'm making a complete fool of myself, you don't have to remind me, please make the feedback constructive)
edit: well I found out how crappy this actually is, too many mistakes.. I'm actually embarrassed.
edit: I guess this is so crap that no one dares comment on it
edit2: used Spencers suggestion (thanks!)
So, I know I failed epically, I bet some of the "facts" in it are not even true, that's why I would really appreciate it if some of you would read this through and comment on it, as it would give me a chance to improve it.
Now, I don't know where to upload text files, so I just put it here in the post in a code block to preserve formatting.. hope you don't mind..
(I know I'm making a complete fool of myself, you don't have to remind me, please make the feedback constructive)
edit: well I found out how crappy this actually is, too many mistakes.. I'm actually embarrassed.
edit: I guess this is so crap that no one dares comment on it
edit2: used Spencers suggestion (thanks!)